Friday 25 June, 2010

Ravanan Sequel - 2 (The Plot)



The Plot:

Prabhu and Veera had never been away from each other for more than a day. Since the day Veera was born, Prabhu was his caretaker. He stood with him through thick and thin. Veera always had Prabhu as his consigliere. But the recent events brought about a distance in their relationship. Prabhu did not like Veera running after another man’s wife. He felt it was ok to kidnap and kill another man’s wife, but not steal her away from her husband. So he decided, for the first time in his life, to part ways with Veera. He was happy that Veera was up and running again but refused to be a part of his next move. He went back to the village to live with Ranjitha. (She’s back..!)

The sun rose over the Mettukudi Police Head Quarters. It was a typical day for Commissioner Dev, until his private cell phone rang. It was Sanjeev, the trusted forest officer. He had some news about Veera’s whereabouts and wanted to know if the Commissioner was going to go after him again. Dev hung up. He closed his office door and walked up to the blinds. He did the math, and it was very obvious to him that Veera had leaked the information about his location to Sanjeev. He did this so that Dev would come to that exact spot and be sitting ducks for him to kill. Despite the fact that he guessed the obvious, Dev decided to go for it. He knew that if he surprised Veera, he would get him for good this time.

Veera splashed water from a rivulet on his face and flashed his characteristic smile. He drew happiness on seeing his reflection in the water. He knew Dev would come after him. And he knew that Dev would spring a surprise on him at the last moment. But Veera was well prepared. Come dusk, he knew what he had to do to complete a bloodless revolution.

As the sun faded away behind the mountains, it was show time. Dev moved into the forest with a heavily armed group of cops in mufti. Sanjeev was by his side and guiding him through the rough terrain. Veera, meanwhile, slowly slipped into the rivulet. He tenderly waded his way through the water. He knew he had to swim for quiet some distance and wanted to conserve his energy. It was nearing seven o’clock now and the forest was very dark. The only light came from the torches of the cops. Dev stopped a kilometer before the spot of the encounter. He briefed his men about the plan. There was almost complete silence as he spoke. The only noise came from Sanjeev as he helped himself to a fruit from a tree top.

Veera, occasionally looked on the sides to see if he was attracting any attention. It was quiet but not completely silent. He knew that the dice had started rolling. With renewed adrenalin, Veera continued swimming. He was only a few minutes away from the spot he had in mind. Dev and his men took their positions. Their first step was to wait for some kind of noise or movement. Sanjeev did the aerial surveillance. They stood with their guard ready. Once Veera was spotted, Dev would take the first shot.

Veera slowly slipped out of the water. He made as little noise as possible. He couldn’t risk being heard or seen, especially with the number of policemen surrounding the area he was in. He worked the lock on the back door and moved in stealthily. He opened the door to what he guessed might be the correct room. And there she was, resting on the ground. Her legs were closely tucked to her body and her hands were supporting her face. Aishwarya was lying tenderly and sleeping off the warmth of her self. Seeing her was worth every bit of the pain that Veera had endured. Things had come a full circle since the last time he had last seen her. He had to wake her up before Dev came back.

It had been almost thirty minutes since Dev and his men took positions. There was no sign of Veera anywhere. Even a cow herd had passed once. It was becoming increasingly  clear to Dev that this whole thing was a fake. But why, he kept wondering. Only then it struck him, that Aishwarya was alone at home. He quickly called off the plan and rushed towards to Forest Officer’s building. He wanted to call the policemen at his house as quickly as possible. But Veera was ahead of Dev on that count. He had worked the telephone wires before slipping into the rivulet. Dev was stuck in the middle of nowhere with no telephone and no signal to call from his mobile. It would take him at least an hour to reach a place with mobile connectivity. By that time Veera would have been long gone, with Aishwarya.

As he moved towards her, Veera was brimming with happiness. What he felt for her was not love, was not lust. It was special bond that transcended the realms of a conventional relationship. He had never felt anything like that before, and that was why he risked everything to be there. It was a one shot chance and he had done very well so far. As he neared her, Aishwarya woke up. She looked at him with mixed emotions of surprise, happiness and fear. She had spent months coming out of those gloomy fourteen days she spent with him. But now, on seeing him again she was back at the same place. Mixed feelings of anger, joy and desolation swept across her face. Veera hadn’t said a word, but already she was a changed person. Aishwarya’s fragile notion of normalcy once again collapsed. But, despite what she felt, Aishwarya turned away and refused to look at Veera directly. She walked away from him and he followed her. He moved to her front and looked at her in the eye. She refused to look at him. Her coldness caused Veera to lose his composure. The voices in his head started screaming once again. For months he had lived without them. She stepped back a few steps and with this Veera lost all the strength he had magically gained. The realization that Aishwarya wasn’t going to come with him struck him hard. All the effort that he had put in was going to waste. He had disconnected himself from his family, people thought he was dead; he managed to keep Dev on the run, and yet he was about to fail. He moved towards the door once again. He turned to look at her one last time. But she didn’t even look at him. Veera didn’t want to stay there a second longer and walked out. He slipped into the rivulet and headed towards the forest.

Dev drove as fast as he could. He still hadn’t reached a place with mobile connectivity. If only he could magically jump like Sanjeev.

Aishwarya leaned against the wall of her room. There were times when she wished she was dead. Her strong notions of good and bad were torn apart. Just as she was she was forgetting everything that she was uncomfortable with, Veera had arrived; and with him all those feelings. She knew she had done the right thing by not going with Veera. But the burden of the decision had taken a big toll on her. She had to live with the choice she had made. And she wasn’t comfortable with it. Of the many times that she wished that her life had ended, now was when she really felt it. As she lay against the wall in her darkly lit room, an earthquake struck the picturesque town of Meetukudi. Though not massive, it was strong enough bring down city’s tenderly built houses. Aishwarya’s body was recovered from the rubble the next day morning. Fate, it seems had heard her prayers.

Veera reached a secret location inside the forest. He sat there all by himself, not knowing what to do next. It was not often that a man like him didn’t know the directions of life. He laid himself on a long bed of rock and looked into the sky. Out of nowhere a gun popped into his vision. He looked up and noticed that a man was holding a revolver with one hand. Priyan had tracked down Veera and knew where he stayed. He was tired of Veera ruining his life. It was his marriage first and now his hand. He wanted revenge for being impaired for life. Veera looked at him and just as he was about to make a move with his leg, a bullet pierced his flesh. He had known the pain of a bullet before. But last time, he had a reason to live. The hope of a new journey kept him alive. Now, he was a resigned man. He looked at his nemesis one last time before closing his eyes forever.

Ravanan Sequel - 1



I saw Ravanan yesterday night and ever since I came out of the movie hall, I had been wanting to write a sequel to the movie. But why a sequel to this movie? I was inspired by Mani Rathnam’s audacity in portraying traditionally accepted good characters with negative shades. Such multi-hued lead characters are typical of Mani ( Nayagan, Dalapathi are a few movies in the same league). Also, the show Prison Break had a big impact on me. The show lived on the kind of thing that I am attempting to do.

(I know it's really long for a blog post, but since the story is a known one, reading this shouldn't be a problem)

For the sake of interesting reading, I will name the characters as follow,
Aishwarya Rai – Aishwarya
Vikram – Veera
Prithviraj  – Dev
Prabhu – Prabhu
Karthik - Sanjeev

My adaptation starts from the scene where Veera falls from the cliff. He is hit by several bullets, but is smiling as he falls down. He is not yet dead and Prabhu is waiting at the bottom of the cliff with the villagers, all holding a well spread net to catch Veera.

Veera lands on the net, the fall made him unconscious. But Prabhu could sense pulse in Veera’s hands and took him for treatment. He could not believe that Aishwarya would come back just to kill Veera, and help her husband settle score. He vowed to strike back at her some day.

Aishwarya was devastated. She could not believe that Dev would use her like that and get back at Veera. She didn’t know if she had to feel happy for her husband or sad for Veera or feel disgusted for being used like a pawn. As the smoke from the gun shots cleared, Dev ran towards Aishwarya and hugged her. He whispered in her ears, “I came for you”. If I didn’t do this, he would come back and get you once again”. He looked into her eyes with all the love in the world, hoping to see at least some of it in her. What he saw was a plain and a bland reaction.

Aishwarya had been through a lot over the last few days. Her world changed from being snow white to shades of black and white, interspersed with no apparent meaning. She had strongly hated Veera till a few days back. But the side of the daredevil that she saw in the last few days, combined with Dev’s harsh words, changed her world for good. The experience made her see black on a white canvass and white in the dark night sky.

The villagers who rescued Veera gave their best in treating him. The bullets were no more in his body. But the bleeding didn’t stop. He needed a special herb located on the other end of the forest. Though he knew where to find the herb, Prabhu needed someone to bring them in a couple of hours else Veera would die of blood loss. Going to the hospital wasn’t an option, as that would only risk Veera’s life. So Prabhu walked to the forest officer’s building. He knew that the one man who could bring the herbs quickly was inside.

Officer Sanjeev, always had a liking for Veera. But he felt that Veera had crossed the line by kidnapping the wife of police officer Dev. So, it took Prabhu some time to convince Sanjeev to get the herbs. Sanjeev didn’t like helping Prabhu, but couldn’t go against the word of the head of the village, where he had to live. Reluctantly, he agreed. And in less than an hour, he fetched the herbs from the plant Sanjeevi and gave them to Prabhu. He knew that Veera would be alive with these herbs and so had to inform the developments to one other person.

Dev and Aishwarya had re-started their lives. The last two months were hard for them as a couple. But they fought their way through the travails. Aishwarya immersed herself in dance. And Dev encouraged her. He thought that dance was the ideal distraction for her to bury the past. But Dev, though he never followed Aishwarya’s dance, started noticing the increasingly dark themes that Aishwarya started to present. He got a feeling that he was losing her for good. He had come to know that Veera had survived the shoot-out, but couldn’t find him anywhere. To the outside world, Veera was dead. Only the villagers in the forest, Sanjeev and he knew that Veera was alive. He was wondering if Aishwarya also knew.

Enter Veera:
In a cave, deep inside the forest, Veera sat with Prabhu alongside him. Veera was recovering well but the gun-shots and the poor medical care made his body weak. But Veera fed on a new kind of strength, one that was previously unknown to him. The strength of conviction made Veera look more majestic than before. Previously he was just a soldier fighting for the down-trodden. Now he was a crusader; someone who had a purpose and a cause to fight for. The happiness that he derived when he saw Aishwarya before being shot, kept him going through all the pain and suffering. He remembered her saying that she wanted to stay with him before he set her free. Aishwarya’s presence on the cliff subsequently led him to conclude whatever he had in his mind. He was pretty sure that she would never be happy with Dev again, after the way he manipulated her. Veera was waiting to be up on his feet once again and bring Aishwarya back. To him, her life with Dev now, was the same as her life with him for those fourteen days. She lived under his captivity during that time. Now she lived in society’s captivity – a married woman had no choice but to live with her husband, even though it she didn’t like it. Veera was not the one to care much for society. He was waiting for the right time to strike. The hunter became the hunted and vice versa. The strange quirks of fate had made everyone circumstantial criminals.

(The plot is in the next post, click here)